Greensly's Potion Emporium

Viability: With the added content, the game has more for the player to interact with and register their preference. What was working before continues now. Much deeper system than it seems at first glance!
Presentation: Charming and funny! Lots of little jokes and clever ideas. The music and sound effects are fun too.
Theme: Ultimately this works as a good-natured parody of NPC dialogue branches. It is a bit like Undertale's Burgerpants, but sweet and whimsical.
Engagement: Very funny and certainly worth multiple replays to get all the small jokes and clever moments. Good job!

I loved it the first time, I love it even more now! Greensly is such a funny lil man. I love the music you added it really captures the vibe well, and the inclusion of a play again button really added a lot of enjoyment to the game!

The UI looks very nice. I like that you color coded certain things; it makes it very easy to read and process. The music fits perfectly by the way! I love how there's a bottle clanking sound effect when he pulls out the potions. very clever and sweet. 

Hahahaha the duck date ending is so fun!!! this game is too cute

This game still has so much wit and charm! The buying then drinking potions thing is a lot more streamlined now too. Greensly is a cutie and I love the duck! (though... maybe not enough for that ending.)

My one tiny critique would be that I kept getting repeated thoughts when asking him what's on his mind - it seems odd that he doesn't react to me telling him cereal is a gazpacho one time and agreeing that it's a soup the next. Maybe making it so that once you've seen one of the thoughts, you can't get it again at least until you've gotten all the others might help preserve the "conversational" element of it.

This game is so funny! I loved the stealing potions route when you just keep stealing even as he slowly creeps back into the screen. The stop sign was the best! The attempted romance route was also super funny! I love it